Mynx on the prowl (ticklysun) wrote in cryptic_minds,
Mynx on the prowl
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Hello. My name is Shannon and I joined your community since I love to write and no one on my friend's list really responds other than to say "Cool." So I figured I would give this a try...here is one of the ones I wrote a few days ago. Thanks for reading this. I made a cut to save all of you the time if you do not want to read it! Ciao!

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Hello. My name is Shannon and I joined your community since I love to write and no one on my friend's list really responds other than to say "Cool." So I figured I would give this a try...here is one of the ones I wrote a few days ago. Thanks for reading this. I made a cut to save all of you the time if you do not want to read it! Ciao!

<ljcut"Nik's Party">
Reeling, and spinning
lights smiling at me.
Old memories attempting to resurface,
drowning them on street corners
and on couch cushions.

Such love,
such peace,
so much I care little if it is cliche.

Heat so alive my body begged,
a quiet night with him right there
and lying in the cold, wet grass.

So what if I didn't say all
I should have said to the one
who waited for it.

My heart belongs to someone else.

My heart belongs to the one
with flickers of fire
in his hair and in his heart.

The sounds of piano
and laughter
and silence from those whose bodies
retired for the night
was just what I needed to be reminded
of how beautiful we all really are.</ljcut>
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